Paula Cifuentes
Ana Maria Ovalle
Trought (Through) the centuries, we have realized that nature is the medium which the human progresses and develops; ( . ) The human being has an hanit, (???) a context, that context is nature.
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Today ( , ) it is possible to affirm that the world and nature undergo constant changes in very (a lot of) possible aspect,(aspects) thus making man constantly adapt to his envioronment, but clearly, with a goal such as the pursuit of growth, happiness, of (NO) confort, and therefore a (???) technology and continious innovation.
Man has tried to find and solve the most hidden mysteries of nature, but even to this day ( , ) he is far from finding them, since all nature itself is difficult to understand; ( . ) Scientists are still in the constant search to know we nature exists, (???) why we are a part of a solar system and a cosmos and why we exist according to the medium .
Trying to understand nature thus (???) understand the existence of the human being is what we want to achive, to finally understand our purpose, (to understand our purpose finally,) our origin and wich (which) is the relationship between the human
and the life that was formed since the beginners of the earth.(Earth)
https://www.tumblr.com/search/girl%20waterfall
Today ( , ) it is possible to affirm that the world and nature undergo constant changes in very (a lot of) possible aspect,(aspects) thus making man constantly adapt to his envioronment, but clearly, with a goal such as the pursuit of growth, happiness, of (NO) confort, and therefore a (???) technology and continious innovation.
Man has tried to find and solve the most hidden mysteries of nature, but even to this day ( , ) he is far from finding them, since all nature itself is difficult to understand; ( . ) Scientists are still in the constant search to know we nature exists, (???) why we are a part of a solar system and a cosmos and why we exist according to the medium .
Trying to understand nature thus (???) understand the existence of the human being is what we want to achive, to finally understand our purpose, (to understand our purpose finally,) our origin and wich (which) is the relationship between the human
and the life that was formed since the beginners of the earth.(Earth)
https://www.tumblr.com/search/girl%20waterfall
Hi,good job but please review the grammar and try to innovate whith new ideas to complement your text. bye biolodivas :)
ResponderBorrarGood work!! It's an intersting topic, but you need to take into account the previous suggestions to write a beter text next time.
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