DINOSAURS ON EARTH
If the dinosaurs had not died ( , ) humanity would not have developed as the mammal it is today ( . ) We would be ( have been) devoured by the dinosaurs (them), without being an obstacle for these (them) and (they) would (have) develop(ed) an intelligence similar to our(s) and even better.
As of course, these (they) would (have) evolve(d) ( , ) and every so long would (have) show(ed) many of the animals we see today ( , ) but with the difference that the birds and some other dinosaur descendants would (have) show(ed) an intellect far (???) superior to the one we have nowadays ( . )
by: JUAN FELIPE TAMAYO
NICOLAS AUGUSTO VARGAS

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