What would you do if you could modify the human being genetically ?
By : Windy Martinez and Gabriela Beltràn.
The mutation is very important because you can select your caracters (characters) and modify your genetic code , thank (thanks) to this ,the humans could be perfect.
When we (were) born we have a genetic code which could change beacuse our necessities and adapt to the environment ...
This process is very important because we could affect or benefit us , we would change the DNA for cure (removing) the genetics illness and elongate (extend) the time of life ( , ) but this is (would have) a risk being that (????) in this situation (you) could have problems and dificulties .
Also ( , ) (there) could exist (be) biologycal wars , (which could) this (NO) affect the humanity and the world ( , ) because always have (existed) conflicts between rich countries for to be (being) the best .
Great idea!!! You developed your post in a good manner. Your ideas were so clear and the reader could think what would happen in that situation.
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