Laura Alejandra Martinez
Currently the dance has been turn (turned) into in a tradition part of a culture for remember,(remembering) admire (admiring) and represent (representing) the past, present or future. The dance also has been turn (turned) into in (NO) a form of life and is commonly a hobbit. (hobbie)
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The dance is important because is (a) part of the soul, makes us more humans and makes of us (our) lifes (lives) more funny, (funnier) this way of life is growing as a business ( , ) as well as fame and admiration by youngs.

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Hi, please review the grammar of your text because it is an interesting and different topic. bye :)
ResponderBorrarI love the passion you have for thistype of art. It's really interesting to know more about this kind of expression. I enjoyed a lot your post, but you need to take into account the mistakes you have for the next time. It could turn the reading harder to read.
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